Tuesday, January 20, 2009

Bob the Hermit RETURNS!!! It's about time!!!


I know you all have been waiting for news about Bob the Hermit. It has been awhile, but Danielle finally got comfortable enough at school to start expressing herself by writing. Yeah!!! Here is her latest story.....

HI

One day Bob and Fred were playing at the park. Fred was playing on the swings. Bob was playing on the slide. A few hours later a little boy came to the park. He said, "Hi". Bob and Fred said, "Hi, what's your name?". The little boy said "Hi". So Bob and Fred said " Hi, Hi.". About a half hour later they left.

They went to Bob's house and Played a board game. When they got done they watched a movie. Then they heard the door knock. Bob opened it and he said "Hi, Hi".

Next when the movie was over Bob and Fred went out for lunch. They sat down at a booth. The waiter came to take their order. Then Hi came along and said "Hi", so they ordered, ate, paid, then left.

The next day was Halloween. So they got up early. Fred went to Bob's house and they went to Mallmart. They got decorations. They got fake skeletons, ghosts and even a blow up Frankenstein. Fred was going to hand out candy at Bob's house.

At about 8:00 or so the first trick or treaters came. There were boys dressed up as Superman, Spiderman and the Hulk. Then Hi came to the door and said "Hi". Hi was dressed up as a cowboy. So they gave him some candy and he left. Then two girls came to the door dressed up as Cinderella and Belle. After that two girls and three boys dressed up as an Indian, a cheerleader, a superhero and a guy from Earth Wars. The last trick-or-treater came at about 9:45pm. By that time about 25 trick-or-treaters came to Bob's house. Anyway, the last trick-or-treater was dressed up as a monster. They gave him/her some candy and then him/her ripped off his/her mask and it was Hi. He said "Hi". They said "Hi, Hi", how are you? He said "hi" and he walked away.

The next day Bob got a letter that said that it was from Hi. It said....."Tomorrow I am moving to Saturn. I will never see you again. Sincerely, Hi.

So Bob called Fred and told him to come to his house A.S.A.P. So Fred came over to Bob's house and read the letter. "So he can only say "Hi", but he can write? What's up with that?" Fred said. Bob said, "That's not important right now". We have to go find Hi.

So they went and found Hi. They said bye to Hi. He said "Hi". (which they knew meant bye). So he went off to Saturn in his space ship, and right at that moment when they thought they would never see him again, he stuck his head out of the space shuttle and said, "You can come visit me any time.". And he dropped a piece of paper out of the window that said his address.

So every three weeks they went and visited Hi. (If that is his name).

About a year later a boy named "Yo" moved next door. And the whole story went over again. And they all lived happily ever after. (Just kidding).

The end.


I hope you all enjoyed it as much as I did. Great Job Dani!!! Keep up the good work!!

5 Yorum var:

Lynsey said...

LOLOLOL
Those things crack me up!

Kelli said...

I know, I don't know where she comes up with them?!?
:-)

Lynsey said...

I love when kids write...it's sooooo good for them to use their imaginations like that. By the way I need her blog address again so I can check it out!

Lynsey said...

hey where can I go to get a cool new blog template? Any ideas?

Kelli said...

I go to pyzam.com sometimes. I will let you know if I see another site.
Oh, and about her blog. I flipping forgot her address...and I forgot her user name and password. Go figure. I would forget my head if it wasn't attatched to me. For crying out loud!!!!